美国人帮我们修改的英语句子？ 美国同事闲暇帮助一些网上语言学习伙伴修改一些文章, 行家伸伸手便知有没有, 一些句子, 大家觉得写的还是不错滴, 经过美国同事的修改, 就可以明显看到细节上面中国人写英语往往会忽略细节, 贴一些简单的在下面, 希望对大家有用: 1) 中国人写道: At present now,I realized life is a long-race.You can't stop,or you will be catch up by others.I have to study a lot of subjects.My mom always said:"why don't you go to study?what if you can't get in a good college?" I have to study hard,but in my head I was more interested in math . My math teacher not only very young and beautiful ,but also very skillful.She is very kind to us.I like her very much.Beacuse we both are chinses,we are too shy to tell others about our truth feelings.we also lost a lot of self-confidence. 美国人改道: At present, I realize life is a long race. You can't stop,or others will catch up to you. I have to study a lot of subjects. My mom always says "why don't you go to study? What if you can't get in a good college?" I have to study hard, but in my heart I'm more interested in math. My math teacher is not only very young and beautiful, but also very skillful. She is very kind to us. I like her very much. Because we both are Chinese, we are too shy to tell others about our true feelings. We also lost a lot of self-confidence. 2) 中国人写道:Today is the Chinese Valentine's Day. I hope everyone can meet their love. I also hope the lovers will have happy ending. 美国人改道: Today is Chinese Valentine's Day. I hope everyone can find their love. I also hope all lovers can live happily ever after. 3) 中国人写道: It's my first time to write a short passage here.And i am not online in this website for a long time.When i saw many people in here do their best to learn their language, i think i must do something for my english too. 美国人改道: This is my first time writing a short passage here. I have not been onthis website for a long time. When i saw many people o n here do ing their best to learn their language s , I thought I should do something for my E n glish too. 查看更多27个回答 . 2人已关注
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