翻译活动讨论A? a change in the temperature of the input stream to a tank brought about by a loss of cooling or an increase in heat input may cause overpressure in the tank. 句子结构和短语solar和echo都说挺好,这里特别提醒大家注意的是may不可不翻。 “a change in the temperature of the input stream to a tank ”。。。“ may cause overpressure in the tank. ”——可能导致储罐超压,而不是一定会啊 如果波动很小,对储罐的压力影响就会很小,不见得会超压啊 咱们翻译的都是生产上实际会用到的文件,一定得严谨查看更多