要申请企业奖学金,请前辈们帮我看下我的自述写的如何? 我是在校的一名研究生,最近在申请一份企业自助的奖学金,需要写一篇自述,我不知道我写的这个可以么,是不是经历写得太过琐碎了。希望各位化工届的前辈能够指导下。多谢啦。发到职场篇不知道是不是合适。 谢谢大家的意见,修改了下。欢迎继续提意见!! Born in a family with a background in engineering, I have been fascinated with chemistry from an early age. I always remember a saying from my father:" Chemical is the stimulant of human progress." When I entered the university, I chose Chemical Engineering as my major and also attend courses in my spare time to pursue a minor in Business Administration to expand my horizons. I am now studying for my master's degree in a research institute majored in Energy and Thermal Engineering, working continuously for 6 days a week endeavoring in clean energy development. It's a valuable experience which taught me a lot. I have pursued two projects during my post-graduate study. In the first year, I offered to be responsible for a project of feasibility analysis on a new biomass energy use due to my own interest- willing to evaluate a new thing throughout the whole process. Always good at self-learning, I grasped the Aspen software in a short period of time and established the model of process, did cost estimates as well as feasibility analysis of its marketing promotion. Fact had proved the second project really a big challenge- a new kind of heat exchanger about to apply for a patent. It's a rough time from concept put forward after lots of scientific and technical literatures reading to having it manufactured, from screws, pipes, steel to a new equipment running steadily, and I'm the only one in charge. Still on my explore now, I am very grateful for these which taught me how to receive and give, how to express gratefulness, how to make cooperation and assistance effectively. I always think myself an initiative, independent, creative girl, who is a talent of interpersonal communication, living a life full of variety. I won honors as well as confidence during my time in Student Union and social activities. After graduation, I will engage with the chemical-related marketing. I'm now a self-supporting student who sometimes do some part-time jobs to reduce the financial burden. And I'm also eager to take this opportunity to get close to my yearning company xxxx, a successful leading chemical producer in many chemical products market. Both are the reasons for my application. I hope my application will be considered favourably查看更多3个回答 . 2人已关注