老王杂感之小明系列-011 Fight on Losing Weight减肥大 ...？ reducing weight, is a hard process. lose weight, 减肥是一个艰难的过程 assume fat as a person; 假设肥胖是一个人 when you trying to reducing him, 当你拼命远离他的时候 fat make noisy, rolling, begging, 他哭闹，打滚，乞求 but me, insist on jogging. 但是我依然坚持慢跑（此处me应为i) when i think that already been thin, 当我觉得自己已经瘦了的时候（此处that从句缺少主语，语态也有点问题，这样是不是更好when i think that i have been thin) with a big dinner, 一顿大餐 when i was full, 酒足饭饱之后 i found, fat sit on the table, oppisite site, 我发现，肥胖坐在餐桌上，相反的地方（为什么坐在桌子上on 是不是可以改个词？还有单词错误opposite是对的） with a winning smile. 带着胜利的微笑~ 查看更多
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