译文修改润色:Tanker Samples? Tanker Samples Tanker samples are required for almost every loaded tanker as final lot documentation of the quality of product shipped. This sample ensures that no contamination has occurred during the loading process. 几乎所有槽车料都需要进行取样分析,分析结果将作为此类装车产品的最终质量证明文件。取样分析可确保装车过程中没有污染发生。 Tanker samples may also be required for received tankers. These samples ensure that raw material quality requirements are being met. 此外,接受储罐也需要槽车料的取样分析数据,通过这些取样分析确保原料质量达到要求。 虽然大意翻出来了,但总觉得有点别扭。 我们这里所有的翻译都跟上面差不多,大意正确,但总觉得疙里疙瘩,不太流畅,没有象读中文小说、散文或古诗那种酣畅淋漓的感觉。难道是英文的句式妨碍了我们正常的中文句子结构,翻出了英式中文?也不知是不是大部分技术类的译文都这样?查看更多6个回答 . 5人已关注